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Don't Walk Away Hi again, I took a week or so off of writing to busk, but yesterday this came to me. So before I go back to work I jotted (recorded) this song. Please comment, I think I will use my acoustic instead of the LP, but you know me, first cut is the final cut when it comes to live music. Thanks for listening. ****** Song Summary ************* Title: Don't Walk Away File:Don't Walk Away.SGU Key=F , Tempo 100, Length (m:s)=1:50 2 bar intro, 40 bar chorus, from bar 3 to bar 42. Repeat x1 chorus Style is _HARD.STY (Hard 70s Soul Rock) RealTracks in style: 4220:Bass, Electric, SoulRock70sAB Ev 100 RealTracks in style: 2526:Piano, Electric, Rhythm FunkTremolo Ev16 100 RealTracks in style: 4231:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm SoulRock70s Ev 100 RealDrums in style:SoulRock70sEv^2-a:Hat & Sidestick , b:OpenHat & QtrSnare *******************
Last edited by DonnyGee; 05/06/24 05:22 PM.
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Hi, Donny.
Easy listening goodness, and nice guitar work.
Cut the bit where the bass keeps going at the end, and it's good to go. (I'd also bring the vocal up a bit, but that's just me).
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Donny, you know how to make good songs. it is very harmonious and coherent.
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Nice song, kind of easy listening and easy on the ears.
The vocals could be a bit louder, though.
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Donny, very nice song.
I really liked the groove.
Nice chord progression.
Great vocal however I agree that it should be more up front.
I also agree about the bass ending.
Nice work.
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Nice song ... but it seems like half a song ... I was waiting for the big chorus ... it has a nice feel, and your vocals fits. Id like to hear more.
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Donny, very nice song with your usual cool vibe. Definitely a keeper in my book!
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Hi Donny.
This is sitting very comfortably on my ears as I listen.
The style works so well with your performance. It's like the two are made for one another.
I found this very relaxing and very satisfying music.
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Donny...very pro sounding track...your vocal is perfect for the style...cool and laid back...but I do agree with Elliot on the length and structure...a great start.
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