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https://soundcloud.com/kfl44/a-card-in-fates-right-handThanks for listening, Kenny A Card In Fate’s Right Hand © 2015 K Leverett From the day you were born you were trapped With these black Kentucky hills at your back Even before the strip miners took so much away It never seemed to go your way Still waiting for a better day And you say that your life Hasn’t turned out like you planned Darlin’ you must be a card in fates right hand When you put all your trust In an angry man Darlin’ you are just a card in fates right hand And you keep betting on a long shot to come in Then wonder why it is you never can win Settled for a mining man Thought he had bigger plans With all the dirt beneath your painted fingernails You’ve long since given up on any fairy tales And you say that your life Hasn’t turned out like you planned Darlin’ you must be a card in fates right hand When you put all your faith In an angry man Darlin’ you are just a card in fates right hand Darlin’ you must be a card in fates right hand Bass: 366 Drums: Nashville Even 8 Guitar: 365 Acoustic Fingerpicking Guitar: 2448 Electric Pop Dreamy Guitar: 2444 Electric Baritone Pedal Steel: 363
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Hi,
Nice song, melody and voice. Good real tracks chosen.
Hello.
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Thanks for posting. This is a really nice song and performance and the lyrics are well written. Good emotion in your vocals and backing vocals were a nice added touch. I thought the overall mix was good. Look forward to hearing more from you soon.
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Kenny,
everything about that is beautiful for what appears to be a sad subject. nice harmonies.
enjoyed that, an extremely good 1st post
Alyn
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Kenny,
Welcome to the Showcase! Nice entrance!
I really liked this. Some strong writing! Interesting title.
"With all the dirt beneath your painted fingernails You’ve long since given up on any fairy tales"
... that's especially nice...
Nice mix, good choice of instruments - presented the lyric well. You have a cool vocal sound!
Look forward to hearing more from you!
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Hi Kenny,
welcome to the Showcase. This is a really nice first post. The lyrics are well written. Very emotional vocals and harmonies. Good mix. Enjoyed my listen.
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Welcome Kenny!!
And you keep betting on a long shot to come in Then wonder why it is you never can win
Absolutely love that! There are some other very good lyrics in here. All in all, musically and lyrically a very cool song. You have a nice, comfortable, natural, laid back style. Really enjoyed it!! Take care. Greg
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Welcome Kenny, Kenny,
everything about that is beautiful for what appears to be a sad subject. nice harmonies.
enjoyed that, an extremely good 1st post
Alyn I agree with Alyn. I really liked the vocals and lyrics. The mix was excellent also. This is an extremely excellent first post!
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I really enjoyed how you put this together. All the background parts creating a soup of sounds and the drum and your vocals propelling the story through it. your vocal phrasing reminded me of Tommy Petty which is meant as a compliment as I like how he can sound urgent and laid back all at the same time. Great job.
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Thanks to all for such a warm welcome, I look forward to posting more and listening to others songs. Kenny
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Hi Kenny,
Welcome to the forum. A very nice first contribution. Indeed, your voice reminds us of Tom Petty, like Patrick said. Good vocals.
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Hi Kenny.
THIS IS QUITE SIMPLY THE BEST THING I'VE HEARD FOR SUCH A LONG TIME.
The lyrics are brilliant. "When you put all your faith in an angry man". Just brilliant.
The backing is exactly right for the mood of the song and the vocal delivery is full of emotion. The mix is good and the whole package is extremely professional.
Welcome to the Showcase and please post some more like this.
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Welcome to the forums Kenny.
This is a great song. Your voice is spot on and your lyrics are great.
" And you keep betting on a long shot to come in Then wonder why it is you never can win" and " With all the dirt beneath your painted fingernails You’ve long since given up on any fairy tales" are great lyrics.
I can see someone like John Prine singing this.
Ps - your backing tracks fit the song perfectly also.
You know you're getting old when a recliner and a heating pad is your idea of a hot date!
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Hi Kenny,
welcome to the Showcase. This is a really nice first post. The lyrics are well written. Very emotional vocals and harmonies. Good mix. Enjoyed my listen.
Guenter +1. You have a great feel on this one. Looking forward to more. Tom
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Welcome aboard.
We liked everything about this -- especially the soulful vocal.
Nice mix and choice of RT's.
Enjoyed it.
J&B
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