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Posted By: rsdean One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/14/24 10:52 AM
Hi All,

Here's something new called One Night In Broken Arrow.

Don’t ask me how I got here
And maybe it’s a fever dream
I’m standing on some ghost ground
And I can hear the screams

You can call it a Hilton
You can discount all the souls
Or listen for the foot steps
Of a wild pony foal

But I can’t shake this feeling
And it’s wicked and it’s narrow
And I can’t lose this vision
One night in Broken Arrow

Don’t ask me what her name was
Or what she likes to wear
I remember all the midnight beads
And silver lotus in her hair

She was talking about freedom
The Creek Tribe never knew
On what became a freeway
Separated from her crew

But I can’t shake this feeling
And it’s wicked and it’s narrow
And I can’t lose this vision
One night in Broken Arrow

The cars race down Highway 51
Where the old tribe used to run
But I can taste the trail of tears
In the blowback from the guns

But I can’t shake this feeling
And it’s wicked and it’s narrow
And I can’t lose this vision
One night in Broken Arrow

But I can’t shake this feeling
And it’s wicked and it’s narrow
And I can’t lose this vision
One night in Broken Arrow

BIAB Tracks:
3786: Bass, Synth, MinimalHipHopHeld 095
3250: Guitar, Electric, Soloist ModernFunk 110
3784: Synth, Rhythm, GhostPads 095
1870: Synth Pad, PopModernGroove 075
Loop: Chillout/Chillout - Everest 85 Bass
Loop: Drums/FolkModernSW16
Loop: Chillout/Autumn 82 Drum
RealDrums: ElecRisersHypeTrain

As always - thanks for listening!

Bob
Posted By: vicarn Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/14/24 11:20 AM
I love the poetry of your lyrics, Bob.
Gives the listener something to think about which is a refreshing change from the norm.
To my ears (which are past their sell by date) there is a bit of low end hum which you may have intended or maybe needs addressing or maybe ignoring.

Vic
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/14/24 06:33 PM
Thanks Vic. Much appreciated. Yes, that low hum is intentional. It’s part of the bass synth.

Bob
Posted By: David Snyder Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/14/24 06:39 PM
Yes, this is very cool Bob.
You're breaking some new ground for yourself with this arrangement, definitely got some very interesting things going on with the funk, and blues kind of a stylistic mashup with electronica going on.
Very nice!
And the lyrics as always are Dynamite.
Posted By: B.D.Thomas Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/14/24 06:53 PM
That's a pretty cool song with (as always) good lyrics.
The band is different from your usual stuff, but I really love it, the bass synthesizer adds a lot to it.
Great idea!
I'd probably transpose the song down a few semitones because I like your voice better when it's not so high, but that's just a personal preference.
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/14/24 08:09 PM
That is an outstanding lyric packed full of great imagery.

The modern funk guitar is cool and the fills make us think of pebbles being skipped across a pond.
And in that pond we can see the visions that he is describing.

The solo supports the mention of the blowback from the guns.
The bass synth is ominous!

Your entire production sounds modern and yet different … in the good way.

Excellent mix, vocals and band as always!

J&B
Posted By: PeterF Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/14/24 10:39 PM
Bob

Great lyric and a really expressive vocal, supported by an interesting and engaging band.

Excellent work.

Peter
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/14/24 11:59 PM
David,

Thanks very much. I appreciate that.

Bob
Posted By: laurent4114 Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/15/24 09:38 AM
Robert. nice atmosphere for this song.
very pleasant.
Laurent
Posted By: DC Ron Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/15/24 10:05 AM
Bob, dark and menacing song...I like it a lot! Great write and vocals. The arrangement and production gives it a very cool vibe.
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/15/24 03:21 PM
Brian,

Thanks - much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: floyd jane Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/15/24 07:55 PM
Bob.

Color me....Blown Away!
WOW.

An incredible lyric. It paints pictures like an art film. It tells a troubled story like a documentary.

The backing tracks are as Fresh and Perfectly Chosen as the words of the lyric.

Your vocal drips with authenticity.

This is Damn Good Music.

fj
Posted By: rayc Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/16/24 02:57 AM
Another in the North American Cartographer's Songbook.
Sounds fabulous - the loops work a treat.
Thanks for the cultural/historical education along the way.
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/16/24 09:26 AM
Janice & Bud,

Thanks so much for that very kind review. I appreciate it.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/16/24 09:51 PM
Peter,

That's very appreciated. Thank you.

Bob
Posted By: MarioD Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/16/24 11:21 PM
Bob, this is an outstanding song.
Fantastic lyrics and a great vocal.
I really liked the backing band.
A great mix.
IMHO this is one of if not the best to date.
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/17/24 09:39 AM
Laurent,

Thanks very much.

Bob
Posted By: BabuMusic Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/17/24 01:15 PM
There are many machines to Bob Dean. Love the Lyric-Writing Machine. Man, your vocals... At first I thought it wasn't you, but that unimitable soud was recognized. What a terrific song, Bob. "Blow-back from the guns" indeed. Sweet guitar really adds the right touch.
Posted By: Noel96 Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/17/24 06:23 PM
Hi Bob.

What a journey!
You've done a superb job capturing a dream-like sequence with somewhat haunting overtones.
The imagery in these lyrics is breathtaking and as the lyrics unfold, the pictures filled my mind.
The writing skills and musicianship on show here are of the highest order.
You've got my standing ovation!

--Noel
Posted By: firesong Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/17/24 08:26 PM
Bob...well that was different...intriguing for sure...you always excel lyrically and produce great stories and poetry in your work...love the intro...raw and dirty...the electric is very cool...another stellar production and arrangement of the band!
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/17/24 09:12 PM
Ron,

Thanks - I appreciate that.

Bob
Posted By: WaoBand Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/18/24 05:15 AM
Great song with really interesting lyrics. Really liked the rhythm track and slightly eerie vocals.
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/18/24 09:09 AM
Floyd,

That is one of the best reviews that I have ever received... It means a lot - thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/19/24 09:29 AM
Ray,

Thanks very much.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/20/24 09:29 AM
Mario,

I appreciate that - thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/21/24 09:20 AM
Marty,

That's very kind. Thank you.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/22/24 09:21 AM
Noel,

Thanks. I appreciate the very kind words.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/23/24 09:20 AM
Dan,

Much appreciated - thanks.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/25/24 10:14 AM
Shay,

Thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: dcuny Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/26/24 03:08 AM
Hi, Bob.

Your lyrics are outstanding:

   The cars race down Highway 51
   Where the old tribe used to run
   But I can taste the trail of tears
   In the blowback from the guns


The arrangement is moody with an underlying sense of tension, and the vocals like the narration of a street poet.

Really, really good. smile
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/26/24 09:42 AM
David,

That's very kind - thank you.

Bob
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/26/24 12:09 PM
Hi Bob,

I really like the band you have put together for this one, great sound, and different.
Excellent lyrics as always! And I always love your vocals, nice spoken word part too.
Nice!
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/26/24 12:19 PM
Dave,

Thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/27/24 10:47 PM
I always love you lyrics. These are fantastic. Some of your best.

Excellent production. I see you are trying new things in the studio. The mood of the instruments accentuates the great lyrics.
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 04/27/24 10:57 PM
Scott,

Thanks. I appreciate the kind words.

Bob
Posted By: Scott C Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 05/05/24 07:31 PM
What a cool intro Bob. Loved the way you processed your vocal. Reminds me of the late 60's. Buffalo Springfield guitar tones. Really well done.
Posted By: rsdean Re: One Night In Broken Arrow - 05/05/24 07:38 PM
Scott,

Thanks very much - I appreciate that.

Bob
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